A 10 point question for the answer i find most honest?

Ok you have a great idea for the story and it sounds like something that I would read. But your details are off. At some points you have way to much details and in others you don't have enough. And also you have a few puncuation errors, but I bet you'll have that fixed before its published. Great way to create something new but some of it rings a bell, like I read it before so you might want to make sure you drift away from the other story or stories. Other than that your good to go, for now. Make sure you keep it all your own and be careful that you dont put all of it on here because people will take it. Great start and Good Luck!